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I need help with a cover letter for a day care center. Anything that would make the want to hire me?

Well can anybody fix this cover letter cause its a mess...


Bright Minds Learning and Childcare Center.

To whom this Concerns:
I recently saw that this business was being built and I would be delighted to work for this company.
As a recent High school/ Trade school graduate, I am looking for a growing firm where I can contribute my skills and drive for Bright Minds Learning and Childcare Center.


I have cash handling experience, child care experience, customer service experience, drive, and determination. Meeting me in person will convince you that I can apply those talents and more to.

Sincerely,

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Public Comments

1. First, remove To Whom this concerns and address it to a specific person who is in-charge. Why? Because you are writing a cover letter for a job. You want to convince them of your interest. However, you have not addressed the letter to anyone specific. So it seems as if you could not even take the time to find out who the person in-charge is.

I understand that you are in the process of building Bright Minds Learning and Childcare Center. I have recently passed out of High School/Trade School, and I would love to be able to contribute to the growth of Bright Minds.

I have prior experience in various facets of the day care business, including child care, handling cash, and customer service.

I am interested in working for an organization where I can use my skills and experience to contribute to its growth.

I am sure that if we meet in person, we can understand how we can work together to help each other grow.

Looking forward to your reply,

Sincerely,

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